She stood there in despair
Holding tears in her eyes.
Numbed, her dry lips moved some;
But, her eyes could tell all her cries.
Taken aback, yet not ripped into pieces…
Chin up, held herself high, but her smile has now what ceases.
Yes, a thunderous storm is much stronger than her, to shatter her world at one go;
But, the storm doesn’t know,
She is not that weak to bow.
Indeed,her tender heart bears all the pain,
To affirm, her life won’t be led in disdain.
She passes through a catastrophe;
Yet, her courage doesn’t allow her to withdraw.
She still stands there
Being a mess…
With a mess;
All her around.
Recollecting all her bits and pieces.
Restarting a journey, again;
Of Being Found!
This storm surely had taken away her precious pearl..
But, she will regain it back
It’s a promise, of an “Oblivion Backstreet Girl“.
Powerful words, really loved this Divya.
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Thanks Miriam 😀
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Got strong will besides the odds she face in life.. Wonderful..
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Thank you, glad you liked it 🙂
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This is so damn amazing !!
Full of depth.
Loved it ❤
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thanks for those appreciating words, Amulya 😀
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You’re most welcome ❤
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Super awesome it is👌👌
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Thanks dear 🙂
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Lovely poem. Come whatever may, she will stand tall.
By the way, where was *this* backstreet girl all these weeks? If I’m not wrong, you’ve long been away from WP. Something the matter?
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Hahaha :D.. Yes the gaps between my posts are now tend to be longer.. yet I will try to reduce those gap asap.. something was not clicking me to share any stuff thats why was being aloof.. I believe quality matters 😉
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Quality does matter, but posting regularly makes a difference too, at least once a week or so? And I believe that not every one of my posts will come out Pulitzer-worthy but sticking with writing regularly makes it that much easier to get the mental clicks for ideas, like making the mind an idea generator. 🙂
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Definitely.. I agree. Will surely work upon it and I assure you a regular interaction henceforth 🙂
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Yay! 👏👏
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And thank you for the read and for noticing the GAP.. feels good that people wait for the posts :D.. I will try to reduce those waiting periods and to keep on sharing stuufs with everyone here. 🙂
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Aarrggghhhh, this slow data connection. The app showed that the comment wasn’t published and here it has been done twice (I guess!). Embarrassing!
Keep writing daily, at least for half an hour
You’ll notice the difference yourself.
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No issues.. I will try to do so.. but not all writings are supposed to be published 😉
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Well, well. Can’t really argue there. Bit I meant the ones that are supposed to be published. He he. 😀
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Yeah.. will try to do so.. but it really feels great that people wait and appreciate our work like this.. thank you so much 🙂
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You’re welcome! Keep up the good work. 🙂
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Thanks for all those appreciation 🙂
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Don’t thank me so much. It was appreciation where it was due. 🙂
Thank me when you find your writing mojo back after putting into practice the ideas I gave you today.
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Okay 😀 definitely.
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And I just gave my CA Finals around 2 months back.. so with a heavy heart I took a break from WP.. It’s addiciting in its own way..and I like this addiction 😀
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In that case, there can be no questions raised on your break. Career deserves priority! Hopefully you’ll clear the exam.
And yes, WP is highly addictive.
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Yes,Hopefully 🙂
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What??? You too are CA student… Well same pinch….
BTW all this while I believed you are studying psychology
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you are in which level of CA? psychology! well thanks for such a great compliment 😁 I can’t resist singing this song.. o Shaggy re.. tere Bina bhi kya jeena.. tere Bina bhi kya jeena 😁
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Have cleared ipcc group 2… Looking forward for an article ship…
Yea psychology because you hypnotise soo well….
I got the lyrics here, let’s sing together….
“O Shaggy Re tere Bina bhi kya jeena.. Tere Bina bhi kya jeena..
Foolo mein kaliyon me
Sapno ki galiyon mein
Tere Bina kuch kahi naaa
O Shaggy reeeeee…
Tere Bina bhi kya jeena ”
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ok all the best for it 😃 this is hilarious 😂
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Indeed it is…..
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Wonderfully written! 💕 Coincidentally, I’ve written something similar in my last post called Lost & Found. It’s funny how sometimes we have such similar thoughts with people we’ve never met, glad to have found you and connected! Cheers ☺️👍👍
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Thanks dear.. yesit is really amazing to share equal kind of thoughts.. glad to meet u 🙂
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Glad to meet you too Divya! My name is Advaita by the way ☺️👍
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Hello Advaita 🙂 will remember for the next time.
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😂 great! Happy to hear that Divya 😊👍
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Beautiful write this is awesome
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glad you liked it 😊
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Ok one should !😊
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haha 😁 thanks for being so gracious !☺
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😊😊😊
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Lovely!
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thanks
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Great post!
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thanks
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